Woah, wasn't expecting such positive feedback on first attempt at composing. I'm glad everyone liked. I composed 8 other pieces since I posted this...and I thank Mythruna for inspiring me to compose all the sudden. If you want to check out the rest heres the link to my current pieces which I update constanlty.
https://soundcloud.com/rickyricardo1117/sets/original-works.
Once again thanks for all the positive feedback!!!
Overall, pretty good!
Silibus, Sneak, Strum, and Flow are good, but sound a little unpolished. I don't know exactly how to help this, though.
Savannah is quite good, but could use a bit more variation in the background guitar.
Try to give Intro more of a build-up. Also, you could try adding a finishing swell followed by repeatable calm music for a menu background (just because it's called Intro)
No suggestions for Finale, but there's probably something that could be improved
Strum sounds great at first, but quickly gets repetitive. Strum slowly doesn't sound quite as good because it sounds like you're stuck either having one instrument play one note, and the other changing notes, or having them changing the same notes. It's fine in the faster version, but doesn't work with the slower one.
I really like Bloom. It has good build up, and a nice melody. Maybe it could use some more variety in the Xylophone thing in the background, but the biggest improvement I can think of is to make it longer!